#NaNoPoMo 04: Cape Town II: Dichotomy

I revised this one over and over and over. It was very frustrating. I was missing words I would have liked to have used, I didn't have enough "-ing" endings to modify words I wanted to use, I couldn't find words I thought I had, I had too many ideas and didn't know how to fit them together....

(Happily, some of those ideas I eventually tossed may end up forming the basis for new poems.)