#NaNoPoMo 07: Prey
This was a difficult one. I had a number of ideas and they all kept going wrong because there'd be one crucial word that I didn't have. I revised this one more than any other so far but I'm still not happy with it. I might reuse some of the themes in new attempts later in the month.
Labels: Bad Poetry
4 Comments:
I like this one best! who would have thunk fridge magnets would reveal your (Twilight) philosophical side :-)
You are projecting! This is about an etheral monster that lives in the depths of the sea - an anti-mermaid, if you will.
Oopsy! I was imagining an extended metaphor from your "NaNoPoMo 01: Twilight" entry. Regardless, I am a fan of your anti-mermaid.
Poetry (and "poetry") is in the eye of the beholder. Therefore you are not wrong.
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